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## Castlevania Bloodlines - Pressure 2A03

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Blackbird The Ninja
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### Castlevania Bloodlines - Pressure 2A03

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Post by Blackbird The Ninja » Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:31 pm

Tell me if it's good, and what could be done better. Thanks.
Invincibility music from Castlevania Bloodlines. Genesis/Mega Drive. Michiru Yamane. Woohoo,

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CosmicGem
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### Re: Castlevania Bloodlines - Pressure 2A03

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Post by CosmicGem » Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:37 pm

It's not very good by any means, it shows potential though. It doesn't have much rhythm and the notes seem to be all over the place.
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Blackbird The Ninja
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### Re: Castlevania Bloodlines - Pressure 2A03

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Post by Blackbird The Ninja » Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:39 pm

Okay, but how so?
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CosmicGem
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### Re: Castlevania Bloodlines - Pressure 2A03

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Post by CosmicGem » Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:54 pm

I understand this is a cover of the invincibility theme of Bloodlines, but some of your choices of direction are.... a tad off-putting to say the least. Since I understand you are relatively new to Famitracker, I recommend choosing a different song to start out with. I also recommend to not use as much arpeggios, I noticed that coming up in your songs too much.
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BioMechanicalDude
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Post by BioMechanicalDude » Mon Feb 15, 2016 4:01 pm

Well, for starters, you abused the Noise channel too much. It doesn't feel like any kind of percussion, just... well... noise. And if you were trying to use it to make a melody, don't. Even with the other duty, the sounds aren't close to actual notes, especially if arpeggios are used.
Speaking of arpeggios, the ones you've used on one of the Square channels aren't in key with the lead melody.
The Triangle channel seems a bit out of rhythm, but I can't determine exactly. It would be nice, if you can post an .ftm file. Not just because that's the way everyone does it here, but because it'll be easier to pinpoint any flaws.
I hope this was helpful enough. If all these flaws are ironed-out, this could be a very nice cover.
And, yes, it would be better, if you started out with something more simple. That way you can practice and gain experience with the tracker.
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