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Jhandsy
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Post by Jhandsy » Fri Jun 26, 2015 7:53 pm

Hey there! I'm working on a soundtrack for a really small, simple game. This is the first draft of the music that plays when you lose. So sort of the game over music, I guess!
I'm pretty new to composing in general, so any feedback, no matter how seemingly basic, would be super appreciated!
Thanks a bunch!

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Jorf
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Post by Jorf » Fri Jun 26, 2015 8:24 pm

Its a good start.
A# would fit the key better than B in the second frame
and some volume envelopes would go a long way to making it sound better.
Maybe some other instruments.
But perhaps a simple song matches the aesthetic of your simple game.
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and video games - http://www.twitch.tv/Jorf_ https://www.youtube.com/jorfdb
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Jhandsy
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Post by Jhandsy » Sun Jun 28, 2015 2:43 am

Thanks for the advice! I changed it up a little and I think it sounds better! I'm also done with a draft of what I think is going to be the main theme for the game. Let me know what you guys think!
Thanks again!

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Ahornberg
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Post by Ahornberg » Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:44 am

I enjoyed listening!
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Shywolf
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Post by Shywolf » Sun Jun 28, 2015 3:52 pm

> Jhandsy wrote:GinTumbleTitleTheme2.ftm

This is pleasant.
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Jhandsy
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Post by Jhandsy » Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:03 am

Thanks for the kind words! My modest goal for this track is to make something that doesn't drive people away form playing the game for long, so pleasant is a reassuring descriptor!
I updated the track a bit, made it a little longer. Take a listen if you're interested! I'm sure it still has plenty of room to improve!
Thanks again everyone!

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