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arethere
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### sunshine vitamin [MMC5] [BETA 0.5]

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Post by arethere » Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:02 am

hi
is this song okay and
what can i do to make it better
thank you

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### Re: sunshine vitamin [MMC5] [BETA 0.5]

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Post by Doc2211 » Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:19 am

Is this your first time making a song? Cause if it is, this is amazing for a first try!
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arethere
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Post by arethere » Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:41 am

it's definitely not my first attempt
I've been using Famitracker since December last year
thank you for the kind words
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Post by LokiStriker » Wed Jul 20, 2016 11:57 pm

I really like the progression, as Im more of a chords guy, and this is a fine entry, I like the build up and the melody its really good for the chords...
To make better... Id say more experiment with effects, but in all honesty I really like the way it is now.
Personally sounds like the first song of a game, like its intro part. Very good job, looking foward to hear more of you.
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Post by Teuthida » Thu Jul 21, 2016 2:06 am

This is really good! I think the arps can get a little overly loud, though. Otherwise quite catchy.
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Post by arethere » Thu Jul 21, 2016 4:26 pm

thank you both for your feedback, I REALLY appreciate it!
overall i feel like it's just too stale so i don't feel like continuing to work on it anymore but i agree that
1. the lack of instruments/effects makes it dull to listen to
2. the arps are too loud and don't really add very much to the song. neither does the channel imitating the bassline (if you can even call it that) - all it is doing is trying to overshadow the shallowness of this song with noise.
one day you like your song and the day after you couldn't care less about it... does this ever happen to you guys?
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Post by Teuthida » Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:05 am

Indeed it does! What happens is that I'll get so into it while I'm making it that I don't notice the issues. After a few days or so, I listen to it again with fresh ears, and it sounds completely different! When that happens, I edit the song until it sounds good again, and then I repeat the process until I get the results I want. That's why it always takes me a while to release stuff.
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