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MagicSpider
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### Outside (VRC6, BETA 5)

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Post by MagicSpider » Tue Jun 07, 2016 3:35 pm

Hi.
It's my very first VRC6 music. Can I have your critics ?

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Teuthida
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### Re: Outside (VRC6, BETA 5)

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Post by Teuthida » Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:15 am

Hmm... This sound a lot like like an RPG Overworld theme! Is that what you were going for? I think the melody's quite weak, though. The accompaniment sounds fine, though.
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### Re: Outside (VRC6, BETA 5)

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Post by MagicSpider » Fri Jun 10, 2016 6:49 pm

Thanks. But the melody is weak ? How could I fix the problem ?
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### Re: Outside (VRC6, BETA 5)

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Post by Teuthida » Sat Jun 11, 2016 10:18 pm

What I'm saying is that it lacks emotion. I'm sorry to say this, but the best way to fix it would be to rewrite the melody. If you think you can tweak the melody into something more "expressive", that would be good too.
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