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Cwshugg
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Post by Cwshugg » Mon Sep 12, 2016 9:11 pm

Hi everyone,
I thought up a melody and decided to see what it would sound like. This is incomplete, but I'd love to hear everyone's opinion. (I'm still fairly new to Famitracker)
I know for sure that it needs a good intro, and just more in general.
Also, I'm not sure if I like that name - if you think of a better one, let me know!
Thanks,
Cwshugg

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Teuthida
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Post by Teuthida » Tue Sep 13, 2016 3:31 am

A few things:
On their own, the melodies sound pretty good, but combined with the bass and other stuff, they sound awkward. Try separating them more using Pxx and octaves.
Your intro has a very harsh transition into the next part; it doesn't feel natural.
You can end a pattern early by placing a Dxx effect. This will allow you to do the noise thing right at the start.
On a random note, your intro bass sounds a LOT like the verse of this: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ehtfEJAINXQ[url] Did you do the same play as me in 5th Grade or something?
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Cwshugg
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Post by Cwshugg » Thu Sep 29, 2016 1:37 am

Thanks for the feedback!
I haven't had much time to fix some of the things you suggested - I've been busy with school. Although since I last edited it (not very recently), I had added a newer section. I attached it.

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Teuthida
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Post by Teuthida » Thu Sep 29, 2016 4:17 am

A lot better! One thing I must note is that when two 50% waves play an octave "chord" they create an 25% like wave. Keep this in mind.
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MagicSpider
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Post by MagicSpider » Sat Oct 01, 2016 1:54 pm

I love your music !
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Cwshugg
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Post by Cwshugg » Sun Oct 02, 2016 4:02 pm

Thank you!
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