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### Low [2A03]

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Post by Graymann2425 » Sun Jul 10, 2016 7:02 pm

Kinda hip-hop sounding. A tad repetitive, but I thought it was neat.

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### Re: Low [2A03]

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Post by stewboy » Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:25 pm

I loved the effects you put in to the bars to spice them up, but for me the song was crying out for a kind of 'opening up' - eg, chords, maybe a slight reduction in the drum rhythm, a fuller sound, a chord progression change to perhaps D->C->A->A->repeat. I really enjoyed the opening up until frame 9 but I was actually slightly disappointed that it didn't go further then.
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Post by Graymann2425 » Tue Jul 12, 2016 11:31 pm

Thanks, and i appreciate the feedback. listening to it again, i see what you mean about frame 9 and on. I'ts very stale, considering the song never moves out of its original key. I'll keep this in mind for future comps. Thanks again o/
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