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The Caller
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### Requiem For A Phoenix [VRC6]

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Post by The Caller » Sat Oct 21, 2017 12:42 pm

This is a little gift I made for a friend of mine. I think it's pretty solid.
Feedback is welcome.

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### Re: Requiem For A Phoenix [VRC6]

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Post by Teuthida » Sat Oct 21, 2017 1:26 pm

It's pretty good! I definitely enjoyed listening to it. That being said, I think your intro could use a few more echo effects or something to really bring out the "epic" feeling. The ostinato in itself is a little predictable, which may or may not be what you want. Lastly, frame 1D and all the frames after it are a direct copy of Heartache/ASGORE's melody from Undertale. You definitely want to change that.
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### Re: Requiem For A Phoenix [VRC6]

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Post by The Caller » Sat Oct 21, 2017 3:36 pm

> Teuthida wrote:It's pretty good! I definitely enjoyed listening to it. That being said, I think your intro could use a few more echo effects or something to really bring out the "epic" feeling. The ostinato in itself is a little predictable, which may or may not be what you want. Lastly, frame 1D and all the frames after it are a direct copy of Heartache/ASGORE's melody from Undertale. You definitely want to change that.

The Undertale leitmotif was actually intentional. I had heard an ASGORE leitmotif in another song, so I thought "if they can do it, then I can as well." I tried to keep it obvious and subtle at the same time. Weird, but I don't think it's a bad thing.
As for the song in general, I agree some parts could use a little more echo. I'll see to that.
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