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Notemaker
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### New song

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Post by Notemaker » Sat Jan 09, 2016 4:49 am

I am back, and I learned what effects were... (Finally)
Cringed at my first song XD So here it is. I wasn't really sure what to do, it was just a clusterfuck of ideas.
Needs improvement, so I came here

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Cat_of_Ananke
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Post by Cat_of_Ananke » Sat Jan 09, 2016 6:22 am

All your instruments seem to be blank? Was that intentional?
You have quite large values for your 4xy effects, usually you want 1 or 2 as the y value or it just kinda sounds out of tune.
Your noise is almost exclusively on a volume of 9, varying the volume to accentuate the important beats is an easy way to get a stronger rhythm.
Your melodies could do with, uh, a bit of improvement :p It's not really clear to me what the tonal centre is supposed to be so try to keep to one scale and make it clear what it is, having your bassline and melody begin and end on the tonic can help with this for simple tunes.
It's an improvement from your other piece I suppose, so that's good. Keep on working and improving.
You can call me Melony, Cat_of_Ananke's a bit of a weird name :p
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Post by Roflo » Sat Jan 09, 2016 2:40 pm

It sounds quite bad, but it has a with a practice this tune can be turned in a nice song.
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