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bomono3
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Post by bomono3 » Thu Nov 26, 2015 7:10 pm

hey, i made some stuff.
i added some FTMs to the bottom of the post, and here are some soundcloud links to my older songs. i would like to know what i can improve on.
https://soundcloud.com/bomono3/fire-plateau-8-bit
https://soundcloud.com/bomono3/rival-fight
https://soundcloud.com/bomono3/flaming-flame-8-bit
its been a long time since i have posted anything, i would love to improve on making my songs more coherent.
edit: american hesitation has 3 unfinished songs on its list.
Edit: im just gonna start posting all my songs this main post.
11/28/15 https://soundcloud.com/bomono3/open-for-all-8-bit-vrc6 a song inspired by castle in the darkness.
11/30/15 https://soundcloud.com/bomono3/lavender-world first song i made that uses the blues scale

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  Yellow Space.ftm
    (11.67 KiB) Downloaded 192 times
  The Final end.ftm
    (12.84 KiB) Downloaded 160 times
  american hesitation.ftm
    (33.31 KiB) Downloaded 153 times

Last edited by bomono3 on Tue Dec 01, 2015 2:33 am, edited 2 times in total.
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NicolasMaeder
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Post by NicolasMaeder » Thu Nov 26, 2015 7:55 pm

Why were you absent from the FamiTracker forums for so long? I'm curious.
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What makes you think this is an acceptable thing to do?
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Post by bomono3 » Thu Nov 26, 2015 8:04 pm

> NicolasMaeder wrote:Why were you absent from the FamiTracker forums for so long? I'm curious.

Because i acted like a 8 year old and i had the ego the size of the internet.
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Post by NicolasMaeder » Thu Nov 26, 2015 8:09 pm

> bomono3 wrote:

> > NicolasMaeder wrote:Why were you absent from the FamiTracker forums for so long? I'm curious.

> Because i acted like a 8 year old and i had the ego the size of the internet.

Thanks for telling me the reason. Also, now you have a new avatar image. Your old one was an Azumanga Daioh character known as "Osaka" while your new one is a furry animal wearing a hat with a Pac-Man symbol.
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Post by MiniMacro » Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:49 pm

these are much better than your old stuff
much
much
better
(i love to browse the old forums)
also,

> NicolasMaeder wrote:Also, now you have a new avatar image. Your old one was an Azumanga Daioh character known as "Osaka" while your new one is a furry animal wearing a hat with a Pac-Man symbol.

i like how you're explaining what his avatar is to him.
wow this is total BS
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Post by bomono3 » Mon Nov 30, 2015 2:06 am

i like how nobody has given criticism yet.
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Post by MiniMacro » Mon Nov 30, 2015 2:22 am

well, if you want criticism...
american hesitation is really cool and i love the 4xx effects that make it sound like triplets. the song is too short, though, and the channels should get more use at the same time. there could be some really cool harmonies in there.
yellow space sounds a bit too offbeat. however, the use of arpeggios is awesome. i'd like this to be longer, though, and i like the creative channel usage.
the final end is really really good. i love the swingy tempo and the triangle bass. it's amazing for the 2A03 only with no DPCM and no overclocking. i'd like to see more of this style of music.
i didn't listen to the others, and i don't want to criticize the unfinished songs in american hesitation because they're unfinished.
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wow this is total BS
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Post by bomono3 » Tue Dec 01, 2015 2:33 am

> MiniMacro wrote:like to see more of this style of music.

iunno if this counts but i learned that the blues scale is a thing today and i had a field day with it https://soundcloud.com/bomono3/lavender-world
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Post by w7n » Tue Dec 01, 2015 1:46 pm

The Final end & american hesitation are both OK-ish, but my feedback towards Yellow Space could be summed up as 'arps aren't used in this way'. Try to avoid using such arps when you have a lot of other channels to spare, or use some of the other channels for harmonies.
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Post by bomono3 » Fri Dec 04, 2015 4:10 am

> w7n wrote:'arps aren't used in this way'. Try to avoid using such arps when you have a lot of other channels to spare, or use some of the other channels for harmonies.

i don't quite understand what you are trying to say, i don't understand what is the problem with using the arps that way when im using it more as a instrument rather than as a means to get multiple sounds out at once, could you give a example of what would be better to use than the arps. because i am sort of confused by what you are saying.
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