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The Caller
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### The Chirping Siren [VRC6]

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Post by The Caller » Tue Oct 18, 2016 9:35 pm

So, hello. Caller's here.
So, just coming around real fast to post a chill and serene shop theme from my RPG. This is the theme of Holy Seed Hotel.
I feel like I could improve this song in some way, but I don't quite know how. So I'm looking forward to feedback!
Thanks. And also, if you're wondering about the title...
https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-4-8u ... better.png

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### Re: The Chirping Siren [VRC6]

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Post by beachbum811 » Sat Oct 22, 2016 11:00 pm

Awesome; truly you're more talented than I at this stuff.
That said, my two cents on the matter:
cent 1: NS_DrumShort, for as much as you use it, is a bit bland. I would give it an arpeggio register of "0 4" or something.
cent 2: The Sawtooth isn't fully utilized. I would make it a bit louder and use it to flesh out the more interesting chords
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### Re: The Chirping Siren [VRC6]

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Post by The Caller » Sun Oct 23, 2016 12:20 pm

> beachbum811 wrote:Awesome; truly you're more talented than I at this stuff.
> That said, my two cents on the matter:
> cent 1: NS_DrumShort, for as much as you use it, is a bit bland. I would give it an arpeggio register of "0 4" or something.
> cent 2: The Sawtooth isn't fully utilized. I would make it a bit louder and use it to flesh out the more interesting chords

Thanks for the feedback!
I added the arpeggio, and I must say, I don't quite like it. Maybe it's just personal taste, but I don't think it sounds right.
As for the Sawtooth, I do think on putting more detail on it.
Anyways, I'm glad you liked it!
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