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The Caller
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### The Eternal Visage [VRC6]

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Post by The Caller » Tue Jan 03, 2017 2:32 pm

Well, since I got absolutely no views or feedback in the WIP of this, I guess I'll just post this instead. It's the full version. Boohoo.
What? I'm not salty. You're salty.
Shut up.

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LokiStriker
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### Re: The Eternal Visage [VRC6]

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Post by LokiStriker » Tue Jan 03, 2017 6:45 pm

I feel this is a good song, not a great song, but a good one.
I can feel that at some points I cant feel the melody in it, I try to track it, and I'm not sure if there's a break currently going on or the melody is there and I cant "see" it.
The progression, tho rather simple, fits the fast paced song you have done, feels like a fighting theme, but has something more going to it, like a lingering feeling of weigh one carries, tho that is just an idea.
But that same progression is the one that hinders your song. You overuse it. I'm very aware I also do this (overusing a short prog) but when I do it I try to make it a build up and not stay constant so even tho its the same thing, it feels different as the song progresses. If your song had some kind of break, a "B" section, still fitting the feeling of the piece and even building more on it, I feel your song could be great.
I would say (this might be just me) try to make your melody stand out more and try to have a "B" section if your song is (structurally) the same throughout the whole of it.
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