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Cat_of_Ananke
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Post by Cat_of_Ananke » Sat Dec 12, 2015 9:04 pm

So, this was one of the first things I uploaded on the old forums, I liked it, but it didn't really have an ending and was really short, but now it isn't, yay~

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Post by Gors » Wed Dec 16, 2015 6:51 pm

Hello! Good to see you!
About this track, I see you tried to do something kinda experimental - there are a lot of techniques here and there but I think they're misused. Most of the times they sound like they're "fighting each other for attention" instead of actually working together.
The leitmotif starting in frame 02 repeats way too much - a hook in another chord would make the song better before it becoming the quiet part with the staccato notes.
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Post by Cat_of_Ananke » Fri Dec 18, 2015 7:05 pm

mm, yeah, I usually like music with lots of stuff going so I try to do it in my stuff as well but I guess I'm still not any good at actual disciplined counterpoint and just always have random, unrelated stuff going against each other. I'll just keep on trying untill I figure it out I guess :p
The frame 02 section only repeats once, it feels fine to me. And it's true that the chords are a bit rubbish but I wasn't going for interesting chords in this piece, I wanted it to have a constant, driving beat, and with the focus on the melodies, not the harmonies.
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